Thursday, 23 April 2020

Descriptive Writing

i have been trying very hard to write longer sentences from Toby

2 comments:

  1. Hi Toby
    Wow, that's an interesting picture you have described! Did Mrs Long give you a choice of pictures to describe, or is this picture from a book you have. You have done a really good job with your descriptions! Well done Toby! What made you choose this picture?

    ReplyDelete
  2. You have described a lot of things in the picture Toby I especially like where you have described the fur like a fluffy cat. I can imagine how the fur might feel now, as cats have soft fur.

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.