Kia ora Toby, Well done on writing such an excellent blogpost about the things that you didn’t get to do during the school holidays. I really like the comedy aspect you have included in your post! You could have gone down a bit of a sad road and included the things that you actually wanted to do but couldn’t, however I definitely like this style so much more! It is so cool how imaginative and creative you were when writing this list. Going to the moon, riding dolphins and sharks, and going in santa’s sleigh would have all been fantastic ways to spend your holidays, so it sure is a shame you didn’t get to participate in these activities. Perhaps you could start planning ways to do these things next holiday! Out of all of the activities on your list, which one would you want to do most and why? You mentioned how you didn’t get to fly in an aeroplane and travel through the clouds. If you did get to do this, where would you travel to and why? You also mentioned how you didn’t get to ride in a submarine and crash into a reef. Have you ever been in a submarine before/ is this something that you would like to do? You have done a fantastic job! Nga mihi
Kia ora Toby,
ReplyDeleteWell done on writing such an excellent blogpost about the things that you didn’t get to do during the school holidays.
I really like the comedy aspect you have included in your post! You could have gone down a bit of a sad road and included the things that you actually wanted to do but couldn’t, however I definitely like this style so much more!
It is so cool how imaginative and creative you were when writing this list. Going to the moon, riding dolphins and sharks, and going in santa’s sleigh would have all been fantastic ways to spend your holidays, so it sure is a shame you didn’t get to participate in these activities. Perhaps you could start planning ways to do these things next holiday!
Out of all of the activities on your list, which one would you want to do most and why?
You mentioned how you didn’t get to fly in an aeroplane and travel through the clouds. If you did get to do this, where would you travel to and why?
You also mentioned how you didn’t get to ride in a submarine and crash into a reef. Have you ever been in a submarine before/ is this something that you would like to do?
You have done a fantastic job!
Nga mihi