Friday 6 August 2021

Holiday Day Writing


I did my holiday writing after we came back after school it was so much fun to write that writing. 
there are heaps of writing on the page there are 6 paragraphs in the writing. I learnt to put paragraphs into my story. I went to Christchurch with Hunter and my Eli's because it was hunter's birthday and he chose me to go with him. We stayed at Eli's house. it was a recount. 









1 comment:

  1. I would love to read your recount Toby maybe you could link it to this post for others to read. What is your favourite writing structure or are you still learning about these?

    Mrs H

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